Valiente El Rey León

[Valiente El Rey León]

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Valiente El Rey León

* tell us a little about yourself.

I was born on a warm July day, the sixith. The year? It was 1989, I work as a Lawyer in a lawform, I lived in Walton for a while as a Kid, but Moved around, and came back here in my adult years. When I was in high school I was the kid who'd bring laughter in the class...But I was never the classes clown. And I was somewhat popular.

* what are some of your positive traits?

I am curious, adventurous, and was all too ready to become an adult when I was younger. I suffer from serious emotional trauma when Taren, my uncle, killed my father. Thanks to a fatal car crash. That my uncle went and broke the brake. I didn't know this however, and Taren convinced me that I was responsible for my father's death,eventually both me and my mother left our hometown. We later picked up a happy, carefree lifestyle with my new friends in my new town in Hawii.

As an adolescent, I forgot my old life and all that had happened. I started to again act over-confident and adventurous as i had when I was a child. Later, when I learned that Taren was hunting my mother down, I faced my past and faced my uncle, Eventually having to send my uncle to the police and have him locked up. But for mother it was too late. She had already died.

As a lawyer and as a father,Leon make good decisions and am more down-to-earth. However, I still retain some of my childhood innocence when around the family Rather than rule by law and justice, I follow my heart and I trust the counsel of my friends, making me a beloved father and parent.

* what are some things that you can improve on?

I am a bit over confident
I can be too over protective about my children
I tend to be a bit untrustworthy of my daughter's boyfriends.

* what's your biggest secret? we won't tell.

I almost killed my own uncle after he attacked my mother.

* what does your heart want?

Straight
Turn on: Bitting neck, Mid back,smart assertive, independent girls
Turn off:Rude, No manners, A lot more to love

* what do you do in your spare time?

One of my hobbies is:Hiking, it's relaxing and it helps me loss stress. I also can't get rid of my adventuresses nature, so the going outdoors and facing the brave dangers out in the world excites me.

* so what does your family life look like?

Murry-My father, Dead-Ex-Police officer-42
Sara-dead-Stay at home mother-41
Taren-In jail-Murder-39-father's brother
[Nala]Wife
[Kiara]Daughter

* what are the memorable moments in your life?

The first most memorable moment of my life was my father's death. Losing my only male father figure I ever had. When he died. I blamed myself for not being able to do anything, I always thought about what I could have done to change it as a child. Because of that, I have nightmares still.. About what happened to my father.

Getting My love of my life. She's the other half of me. My best friend. She knows me almost more then I know myself. [nala] Has always been there for me and has always been my best friend since I can remember which was around elementary-Third grade I believe.

Seeing the birth of my daughter. My first little girl. Whom I will protect with all of my might. No monsters or jerks will get to her. As she grows older though I can't help but want to trust her make, give her more free roam in her own life. Make her own choices and learn for herself...But at the same time I want to protect my little baby girl, even though she's not a baby anymore.

* so we've heard that you're a lot like disney character goes here

name: Valiente El Rey León means:Brave Lion King
play by:Bradley James, It's who I always pictured a human Simba to be. Even if Bradely's hair isn't as wild and long as simbs.
positive traits: He as shown in his t.vs how diary's has a attitude that i find mirrors simbas playfulness,and his jokes-like when simba, pushed Kiara off the jock. Bradely puts on signs that say his co-actors are losers, in french when they are staying at a hotel for a premiere of an episode.
negative traits:Simba worries a lot about his daughter Kirara and even wen \t to the lengths of having Timon and Pumba babysit Kiara. Bradely is or can be worry about things, not a daughter or kid just yet though-But when he and fellow co-workers where at the market he said "And I don't have any milk, and it's making me angry!" In a way, when Simba get's angry when Kiara isn't being watched over, because he knows what can happen to everyone, he could lose someone just like that.
orientation:Both Bradely and Simba like girls. Bradely's dating a girl while Simba married Nala.
turn ons:I have no idea. Just made some things up. That and nala is pretty. And I think Bradely is looking for a girl similar to Nala's personality.
turn offs:I have no idea. Just made some things up. Besides, Nala was not fat and she was able to hold her own.
spare time:Kinda pegged Simba as a hiker type. Just made some things up. And I really have no idea what Bradley would do in his spare time.
family life:Bradley's family life is one that I can't find any info on, and so I have no idea what it's like, so I used Simba's family history, Though I did change a few things, like Scar getting put in jail, and Sarabi dying right after...and how Muffassa died.
memorable moments:Well, Seeing as the movie in a way centered around Muffassa's death, I think it's a big issue and should be a memorable moment. The day your parent died should be one you can and will never forget. Simba's turning point from Heir to the throne to a exiled cub proclaimed 'dead' To a carefree cub who wants to forget his whole life up to that point to a Adult lion with a reason to come home, a that was made clear when he was told that he was the true king by mufassa.

The having Nala be his queen and love, It's a memorable moment because she was his best friend through the movies and in a way, his rock. She also tried knocking some sense into him and in that Simba respond to the effect of"Your not my father" And she goes "Well at lest on of is acting like it"

Having Kiara was another moment in simba's life that he'll remember just because it's his first daughter, her first birthday, her first everything will be special, and when isn't a child memorable to a parent?

this application was written by fireH, who also plays None yet....

[MARV !!]

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Thanks for joining the site but we really need to see more in an application, especially with the connections, where we need you to show and not tell an example of telling is your memorable moments where you say 'pretty much like simba's' that's telling. what we want is for you to show us by using examples from the movie and how that relates to the memorable moment. An example of showing and not telling is that my character Rachel, who is the personification of Meg, is a good judge when it comes to people lying to her because in the movie she says, 'he came on with this big innocent farm boy routine but i can see through that in a Pelaponisian minute.' We don't need exact quotes but some evidence from the movie like a scene or something that they did is needed. Below are some examples of what we like the apps to look like when they're all filled out. Also your Simba Icon needs to be 100x100 if you type in Simba Icons or Lion King Icons into photobucket or tinypic something should come up since it is a pretty popular movie. Also your display name and the title of your app are formatted incorrectly. Please refer to the rules so that you can fix this problem. That would be how we know you read the rules. When you have added more to this app and fixed the aforementioned problems, please bump your app so a staff member can re-evalutate it. Since Simba is a main character and the movie is about him, there's a lot of information on the character and we would like that to be reflected in the app. Some of the examples below are really long and your app doesn't have to be that long but looking at some of them will give you a better idea about what we look for in an application.

Javier Redman Brendan Conland Anita Dearly Erik Evans Basil Holmes

You most certainly do not have to read all of these apps. They're just some good ones that vary in character importance some are main character and some like Brendan Conladn who is the Prince from Snow White, their disney characters were only in the movie for a short amount of time. We hope that this helps you to really develop the character further. If you need any help just ask.

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[Valiente El Rey León]

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[JEN !!]

We still aren't seeing much of an improvement with the application. Thank you for fixing your display name, but the title is still formatted incorrectly and the application is still severely lacking depth and information. Simba is a main character so there should plenty of things to write about, and yet for some portions you only make three statements. We like the applications here to go more in depth, such as the many that you were linked to, but even after being asked for more information, it doesn't seem like that was taken too much into consideration. A lot of the portions you just listed things, and that won't ever be accepted here, since it's an intermediate to advanced role-playing site. If you do still want to try and be on the site, then you're really going to have to put in a lot of work for your next application. We highly suggest reading through some of the accepted applications on the site (like some of the ones you were linked to) to really get an idea of what we are looking for. We also suggest that you don't rush on your application and that you take your time and make sure to do the character justice. Also, make sure you realize that you are personifying a Disney character, not the play-by or anyone else. The character needs to be as closely linked as realistically possible to the Disney character of your choice. I say this, because in the family life connection, you mention not being able to find anything on Bradley's family life. This application isn't supposed to be about your play-by, by instead it's supposed to be built around Simba and the character you're making him in to. All in all, this application isn't what we're looking for, so we're going to have to deny it. Thank you for the interest in our site, and if you do still wish to join, please make sure to read all the information about the site that is around here, pick a character you know, and read though some accepted applications to gain a better understanding of what we look for here. Thank you!